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Majesty



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Registration date: 2008-07-17

PostSubject: Majesty App :3   Fri Jul 18, 2008 5:58 am

Furre Name: Majesty

Character Description
The deviant seductress of calculative and diplomatic mien entwined the traits of alluring physique and exotic markings with ruthless cruelty and aquired arrogance. Feathered appendages flattered the outlandish beauty already set as flawless pelt added a touch of elegance. Rogue temptress wasn't one for the ignorant or stupid, though would bear to converse with such a sort if any gain was thought to be had. Unquenchable thirst for power was near insatiable for dove was always in lust for more.

Special characteristics: Wings :3

Picture of your character:
http://renahmoonsinger.deviantart.com/art/Majesty-84625404
http://brennaraven.deviantart.com/art/For-Hexy-Majesty-89886093

Height: 3ft

Weight: 120 lbs

Species: Dragonic Zombie Mutt x Timber Wolf

Breed: Whatever that makes xD

Sample Posts:

Majesty meandered around the all too familiar terrain, a gentle lope carrying lithe figure along. Boredom reigned supreme over mindset as aimless voyage continued, the hope of another to converse with became the goal. In the overpopulated area such a feat would seem easy if not in-escapable but all too often loners were met with hostility or indifference. Previous knowledge of such dicated that the rogue seek the company of another such being, visionaries constantly scanned the terrain in the hopes of spotting such a being for sense of smell was almost useless in such a vastly habitated area. Aerials swiveled as keen eye sight locked onto a strange sight in the distance, a hybrid figure perched in a tree. Curiosity was aroused and short trek was made to meet the enigma. Upon approach dove meandered in and settled hindquarters into the dirt beneath the tree, nape craning upwards to properly look at the being. Bitch was anything but quiet upon entry, hoping to attract attention.
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PostSubject: Re: Majesty App :3   Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:20 am

Just be make sure you read over the rules on a Winged Character that it can only "soar" for a certain amount.

Other than that I see no big problem with this application

I say Accepted. Just wait for two other staff approval. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Majesty App :3   Fri Jul 18, 2008 7:12 am

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Aerials swiveled as keen eye sight locked onto a strange sight in the distance, a hybrid figure perched in a tree. Curiosity was aroused and short trek was made to meet the enigma. Upon approach dove meandered in


My only problem is the minor Wolfspeak used in your post. Ears are not described as "aerials" in a normal conversation. Enigma is rarely used as an adjective, and dove is an extremely uncommon name for a female wolf, regardless of your wings.

Your description was wonderful. Just be careful not to use Wolfspeak, and you'll be fine. ^^ I say accepted.
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PostSubject: Re: Majesty App :3   Sat Jul 19, 2008 2:14 am

I loved your Roleplay. Its very well thought out. I say Accepted as well.

Congrats! <3

Just remember all the guidlines. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Majesty App :3   Mon Jul 21, 2008 3:57 am

Perfect :3 I enjoy wolfspeak btw. I feel there is nothing wrong with it at all, it just makes roleplay more interesting for me and many other people I roleplay with. I used to roleplay 'elitely' wat back when and It's a habit that I could never completely kill off. I dont see a problem with it although I do know it bothers some people.
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